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4. In a paragraph rich with sensory detail, write about your own most frightening moment.

The most frightening moment __**i**__ ever had was __wen__ me and my friends were in the woods in the dark.We __heard__ scary noises like one of the noises sounded like a bear clawing a tree.We all __herd__ the leaves blowing and it sounded like someone was walking __tourded__ us so we ran down a hill and __tryed__ to __hid__ from whatever it was. We got up out of __are__ hidden spot and we __didint__ hear nothing so we continued are to look around we climbed back up the hill and we __looked__ to see if anything was there. There was nothing at the top of the hill but we found a farm and a barn and a farm house it looked like no one was there so we went to check it out we went to look in the barn first there were shovels and ropes and stuff like that in there.we went and looked in the house no one lived there so we left.that was one of my most frightening moments.

TB - run on snetences, too many spelling mistakes use of i

2. When you hear or read of a car accident that involved teenagers, what do you tend to assume was the cause of the accident? What about if you hear about an accident involving the elderly? Explain your answers.

If __//i//__ were to hear about a car accident with teenagers __i__ would think that they would of been doing drugs or drinking __bear__ in the car. If __i herd__ about and elderly accident __i__ would think they took __there__ eyes off the road for a spit second.is __that__ is wha__ti__ think about teenagers and elderly driving.

12. Do you feel that your parents 'get' you or don't understand you at all? What makes you think this? Explain. I feel that my parents get me because everything i do they wont to no what it is and everything .They understand me all the time so i think my parents get me.

11.Does doing homework help you to perform better on tests? Does homework seem purposeful to you, or is it basically a waste of time? What alternate do you suggest? Defend your answer.

Homework helps me with my test because i get more practice on what i need to now. teachers dont give people homework for the fun of it they give them homework for more practice.

TB - interesting that you say this

1. Put yourself in place of one of the boys who escaped the crash but was forced to watch "helplessly as Rob died." What is going through your head? How do you feel physically and mentally? How do you think that you will feel tomorrow?

if i was in a car crash and my friend died i would feel like a failer i would not be able to do any thing and it would be stuck in my head. for a long tim e i dont know what i would doand thats what i would do.