TT+Mitch

7. In his homework assigment, Gerald writes that he would rid the world of 3 things. What 3 things would you rid the world of? Stick to concrete items, and back up your choices with personal reasons why you are eliminating them

If I were to rid the world of three things they would have to be, poorly built houses, places that say Do not enter on the front, and old fishermen.

The reason I would get rid of poorly built houses is easy, because my house is obviously poorly built, it may not look it but it must be. Like when __i__ go to get a shower and __theres__ a wood spider in the shower curtains, I slip, __i__ fall, who benifits from that? Not me. Or when it rains, __my__ ceiling in my room leaks, and it just __soo__ happens too leak right on my bed!! Then __i__ have __too__ sleep on the floor and use a sleeping bag, not to mention __theres__ no heat in my room which makes it extremely cold. That is why __i__ would get rid of poorly built houses.

Now the reason __i'd__ get rid of places that say "Do not enter" on them is because its too tempting. I mean kids see it, __there__ curious they have __too__ know __whats__ in there __soo__ they __brake__ in and get in trouble. Like the abandoned storage houe behind my grandmas __i__ finally couldn't help but wonder what was in there __soo i__ broke in and got arrested. I had to do community service deffinitly not worth it. Thats why __i__ would get rid of places that say Do not enter.

The reason why __i__ would get rid of old fishermen, well __there__ just horrible people. They go down to the dam with a few beers, __therre__ beat up tackle box and a pole. Every time they catch a fish they throw it up in the rocks instead of the water __witch__ is easier.Then they leave the bottles on the __peir__ a few are busted, fish guts, and a huge wad of tangled string. Now this might not seem that bad but the fish stink really badly, you get cut on the bottles, and the string gets caught on everything. They turn a nice peacfull trip to the dam into an experience you'd pass up any day.

Those are the three things __i__ would rid the world of and why __i__ think they'd make life better if they were gone.

TB - Mitch, you can do better. The thoughts ar good, but there are too many misspelled words, usage of i, run-on sentences.

16. Andy envisions that Monty will have a future as a lawyer or a doctor. But when he thinks of his own future, he sees a blank or darkness. Can you picture who you will be in 15 years? What do you envision for your future?